Should the current laws in your country be revised or changed?
I've choosen a really curious topic for me considering current laws in my country. I reckon some of them should be changed or removed, as they are not appropriate.
For instance, the disconnection of Internet is definately absurd and current for Russia. The government promises it will be painless for the Russians, but most do not think so. Why is the government going to do that? Just because of political points, I guess, as it won't be convinient for people at all. Some messangers, apps we're used to won't be available.
Another negative point of the disconnection of Internet is that realization such a reform' demands lots of money. You can not even imagine how many money needed. It is said that just for the estamblishment the goverment spent 300 mln dollars!!! What a shame! I guess, such sum could be spent on something more important for Russia. For instance, our country has huge problems with poverty. Prices are rising but not people's wages.
To sum up, I wish our government made decision directed on people's conditions of life. Some of reforms are really stupid and useless.
I've choosen a really curious topic for me considering current laws in my country. I reckon some of them should be changed or removed, as they are not appropriate.
For instance, the disconnection of Internet is definately absurd and current for Russia. The government promises it will be painless for the Russians, but most do not think so. Why is the government going to do that? Just because of political points, I guess, as it won't be convinient for people at all. Some messangers, apps we're used to won't be available.
Another negative point of the disconnection of Internet is that realization such a reform' demands lots of money. You can not even imagine how many money needed. It is said that just for the estamblishment the goverment spent 300 mln dollars!!! What a shame! I guess, such sum could be spent on something more important for Russia. For instance, our country has huge problems with poverty. Prices are rising but not people's wages.
To sum up, I wish our government made decision directed on people's conditions of life. Some of reforms are really stupid and useless.
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ОтветитьУдалитьHello, Katya! I think that the topik you have chosen is really important in our world, as more and more people feel themselves uncomfortable in the country they live. And very often they feel like this because of law pressure. And the examples you gave are convincing too!
ОтветитьУдалитьHello Katya,
ОтветитьУдалитьthe topic you have chosen is indeed very interesting. You can't actually say that it is "curious" because in this case you are curious about it. Check some examples of its use on https://sentence.yourdictionary.com/curious
Also, you mention the amount of money spent on establishment but have not indicated the source, which is necessary whenever you refer to any data taken from some external source of information
But what is more important actually is that a standard college essay should contain 5 paragraphs, so you need to add one more and consider another point.
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