Hey, everyone! Today I'd like to share my thoughts about the role of family in peolple's life.
I guess family plays a really great role in life of every person on the planet. It gives us a huge spuctrum of emotions from positive till negative ones. Just a good, united family could teach us right things.
During the home reading class, I've read a book called "About a boy'. One of the main massages of it is the role of family in people’s lives. For example, 36-year-old Will doesn’t have his own family but it’s alright for him. But when 12-year-old Marcus appears in his life, things change. His view on life changes a lot. By the end of the book, Will realises that family is really important.
Family is very important in everyone's life. Behavior, position in society of any person depends on how parents brought up the person. Parents will always help and tell you what is bad and what is good in the world.
So, why is a family so important? I think it's because the family teaches the most important basics of life. If a child is well brought up in the family, he grows up a good, decent person. I think support, love, care and understanding in the family are the most important factors that everyone needs for a happy life.
Katya,
ОтветитьУдалитьI'm sorry but a standard length of an essay is 5 paragraphs, while yours is just 3, which means you need to develop it further.
Katya,
ОтветитьУдалитьyou've added a paragraph to the original draft but as I mentioned above a standard essay has 5 paragraphs.
You need to develop the 3rd body paragraph and add one more, discussing another aspect of what makes the family so important for you and many people around you.
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